Camp Merc Acrostic Poem

WALT: Edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback

Learning reflection:

I was able to edit my work with Mr. Owens. I get feedback from him , he told me that I have spelling mistakes and that my punctuation where in the wrong places.


Next time I  will look for the red lines and correct my spelling mistakes. I will also put my punctuation in the right places.