Thursday 30 March 2017

Camp Merc Certificate




I got this certificate because I went to Camp Merc.  I liked camp because I like sports and it was fun.  My favourite activity was sailing because I love water activities.
                                                                           

Camp Merc Acrostic Poem



WALT: Edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback

Learning reflection:

I was able to edit my work with Mr. Owens. I get feedback from him , he told me that I have spelling mistakes and that my punctuation where in the wrong places.


Next time I  will look for the red lines and correct my spelling mistakes. I will also put my punctuation in the right places.

Wednesday 1 March 2017

My Word Clarification Sheet


Walt: actively seek to extend my word knowledge.

I was able find words that I am not sure about and put them on word clarification chart.   

Next time I am going to put in only words that I don't know the meaning off.  I will try hard not to include words like TV and milk because I know what they mean it's just I don't know a lot of information about them eg. craving.    I will make sure that use my own words because that way I will understand what I am writing.